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take it the first letter was an s..try make your lines straighter dont bend them round things unless the bar goes like that

follow that style sesh i ssohwing you for sure Paz, it's dope!

Cool site! thanks for the invite to it. i havnt been drawing for the past week or so. I just got done moving back to cali. and just got internet back up.
Ill post up some stuff later.
@-mistadous i like that S.

thinking about changing name to ERMS

MistaDous wrote:

take it the first letter was an s..try make your lines straighter dont bend them round things unless the bar goes like that

thanks for the tip bro!

this forum moves slowly. crits on ER???

scow wrote:this forum moves slowly. crits on ER???

yes it is apparently..
invite more people.. if you want to..

I'd make that 3D a little smaller..
but like the e and the r..
maybe lose that line that separates the e from the r.. where they go over in each other..

3d effect is whack, you need to check how others do it, get your lines cleaners so just keep pracitcing over and over, and try to keep consistency between the letters and your bars should be too exaderated, so be careful about that


sorry i'm a busy person recently school/work/girlfriend/graffiti keep me held up

not sure. not posting this on ama cuz ill get chewed out.

you're making in lines, the top left part of the O is a big no-no

... just leave the lines a bit more open unless they need to show a break in certian areas, and that I is fuckin whackk, can't understand it

colour sheme is good

scow wrote:
not posting this on ama cuz ill get chewed out.

That's the point of NTA. We realize people have feelings.

Ladotch wrote:

scow wrote:
not posting this on ama cuz ill get chewed out.

That's the point of NTA. We realize people have feelings.

*shock*

do they???

it''''''s all a lie saiko, weare all robots ploting to kill you and your family.

The Silent One wrote:it''''''s all a lie saiko, weare all robots ploting to kill you and your family.

thank god..

th at last one is a bit funky, and the letters are all scrunchy and hidden, the top one is getting somewhere for sure

i dunno. i like this piece. well the concept. this is the direction i wanna head i think. now to refine.

**edit**

that 3d is crooked as shit. just. agh.

bump bump bump

a couple of pen freestyles


done today in school

ctrits???