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I hope these things make mé charac-king ?

holy fucking shit, that top page is increadable looking, and the rabbit's portportions need a little work but they look good

The Silent One wrote:holy fucking shit, that top page is increadable looking, and the rabbit's portportions need a little work but they look good

the middle rabbit was a design..
for a costume..
need to remake it.. but I don't have the time..

top page, bada**, the rabbit looks a little weird to me, but im not really good at giving crits on character sketches....

Lil Jeb wrote:top page, bada**, the rabbit looks a little weird to me, but im not really good at giving crits on character sketches....

middle one just looks weird 'caus the proportions aren't good
second rabbit is fine though?
his feet and his hand aren't finished but that doesn't botter me.. I'll leave it like that

Saiko wrote:

Lil Jeb wrote:top page, bada**, the rabbit looks a little weird to me, but im not really good at giving crits on character sketches....

middle one just looks weird 'caus the proportions aren't good
second rabbit is fine though?
his feet and his hand aren't finished but that doesn't botter me.. I'll leave it like that

Yeah Middle one is a bit weird, Like you said, proportions and all. Second one looks really good though. I must say I love the clock.

I'd also like to say that you have amazing calligraphy +points for that, good flower as well as the stuff surrounding it, I don't know what the correct term is, but I think its something like flourishes.
Over all great stuff on characters.

thanks man..
worked for days on the top one..

damn you improved man..

love that irish charac

(thanks for coming btw )

yeah thanks ive done mad work on basic art skills in genral and ur welcome

damn that irish drawing was badass dude! reppin the irish and i love your style man!!!

dumbasstic wrote:yeah thanks ive done mad work on basic art skills in genral and ur welcome

it really shows.. nice!

thankyou thankyou

hey pal, welcome. Nice stuff, judging by your semen ;P but real good.

lol gratzi

hate, for the battle..


for the own name battle

Saiko wrote:
hate, for the battle..


for the own name battle

your getting some fresh stuff saiko
wanna see more

and if you dont mind, crit my last piece ? know the coloured suckd tough ..

that top one... has perfect flow, latters are alligned, fill is getting better, bars are much better, keep it

the second one has shit extensions that ruin it, but it's still has potential


keep it yp saiko

The Silent One wrote:that top one... has perfect flow, latters are alligned, fill is getting better, bars are much better, keep it

the second one has shit extensions that ruin it, but it's still has potential


keep it yp saiko

thanks for the first piece

you mean the add-ons on the s?
'cause I wasn't really happy with them..
or you mean others?

henrikkalv wrote:

bubbles ruined a lot I guess..
add-on on the k is too big.. it has to be a detail..

and the forcefield is bit too wide in my opinion

yes agreed in that

trying to progress that style

new shiz i made


crit me
peace

can't read it..

but that last blockie thing looks bad.. kills the flow..